oct/19/14
spark club by sahil nanda
spark club is a club where you do random acts of kindness for people around you. like in spark club right now we are planing to throw a party for one of the teacher and a school wide thing that i cant talk about right now. also we talked about how we feel today by giving a number rating out of five and then saying we where where that happy or sad, example is i am a five because it is Friday to day and i can sleep in or im a two because i am sleepy today. and its a little weird because there is three boys out of fifteen girls in the class!
The club was being ran by madam Amenta in room 111 from 11:15 to 11;45, where we all where just talking about how we could do nice things for the school, like i gave the idea of running a round the school with a cart of coffee and giving all the teachers coffee with donuts.
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ReplyDeleteHi Sahil,
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you gave some information about the club (what the club is about). I think that you used some slang when you were writing your blog. For example when you said, "Like in Spark Club right now, we are planning to throw a party for one of the teachers." In this sentence you said "Like in" Generally you would say that when you speak. Not when you write. One other thing that I like about you blog post is that that you gave an example. It helps to understand what you are trying to say. I think that you could have put more time into it (Fix grammar, also make your post longer). I think that you fit the criteria well, assuming that you did the second option. It sounded like you were not quite sure what the club was about and that some of the things that were said at the club were classified.